Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

On December 10th last year, we paid a visit of a high-tech agricultural garden. It took us one and a half hour to get there. The natural environment there was very pleased, and we could breathe fresh air. The intelligent glass greenhouse, where many kinds of fruits and vegetables were growing there, was really amazing. Though it was very cold outside, the greenhouse controlling by a computer could provide a proper temperature. That was also very interesting to be surrounded with different plants. We could see so many colorful fruits and vegetables in the greenhouse where all of us have never seen before. Luckily, we allowed to taste some of the fruits and vegetables. We really had the good time and learned a lot from the visit.

Answer 1

【答案】1. of—to

2. hour---hours

3. pleased---pleasing/pleasant

4. 去掉there

5. controlling—controlled

6. That---It

7. where----which

8. have—had

9. were allowed

10. the---a

【解析】1.a visit to---，對(duì)---的一次訪問，故把of—to。

2.句意：一個(gè)半小時(shí)。用名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把hour---hours。

3.句意：那里的自然環(huán)境是令人愉快的。故把pleased---pleasing/pleasant。

4. The intelligent glass greenhouse, where many kinds of fruits and vegetables were growing there,此句greenhouse是先行詞，在后面的非限制性定語從句中做地點(diǎn)狀語，由where引導(dǎo)，可知there是多余的，故去掉。

5.句意：盡管外面的天氣很冷，但是被電腦控制的溫室的溫度是合適的。此處過去分詞做后置定語，故把controlling—controlled。

6.具有：被不同的植物包圍著也是非常有趣的。此處是it做形式上的主語，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正的主語，故把that---it。

7.此句中the greenhouse是先行詞，指物，在后面的定語從句中做賓語，故把where---which。

8. 通篇過去時(shí)態(tài), 敘述參觀工廠已是過去, 這里句意是參觀工廠之前沒見過, 所以應(yīng)該是過去的過去, 要用過去完成時(shí)，故把have—had。

9. 在這里“我們”和“允許”之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系, 因此要用被動(dòng)語態(tài), 時(shí)態(tài)是一般過去時(shí)，故在we和 allowed之間加were。

10. have a good time為固定搭配, 表示玩的開心, 玩的愉快，故把the---a。