Question

【題目】高中階段，學(xué)業(yè)繁重，為了保證學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間，學(xué)校決定在高三取消體育課。但學(xué)生普遍認(rèn)為應(yīng)該勞逸結(jié)合，體育鍛煉在高三也是必不可少的�，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一篇保留一節(jié)體育課的倡議信.。

注意：1.內(nèi)容包括：（1）取消體育課的弊端；

（2）說(shuō)明課外活動(dòng)和體育活動(dòng)的必要性和益處，至少三點(diǎn)。

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 詞數(shù)100左右

Dear headmaster,

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Yours sincerely,

student

Answer 1

【答案】Dear headmaster,

It is known that our school intends to cancel our sports class when we are in Grade 3. Teachers and parents may agree, for there is only one year left for us to take the college entrance exam. However, we students hold the view that we should combine work and rest.

First of all, supposing there is no sports class, we will have no time to take exercise, which will badly influence our body health. Besides, actively taking part in sports activities will not only make our school life colorful, but also improve our learning. In addition to building our bodies and enriching our knowledge, the activities also free ourselves from the heavy work of study. Last but not least, to be well prepared for the final exam, it is necessary that senior students attach importance to take exercise and keep healthy.

In a nutshell, it is strongly recommended that our school arrange one sports class a week for us. Looking forward to your agreement. Thank you very much.

Yours sincerely,

student

【解析】本文書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫(xiě)一封倡議信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇是一封倡議信：高中階段，學(xué)業(yè)繁重，為了保證學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間，學(xué)校決定在高三取消體育課。但學(xué)生普遍認(rèn)為應(yīng)該勞逸結(jié)合，體育鍛煉在高三也是必不可少的�，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一篇保留一節(jié)體育課的倡議信.。注意：1.內(nèi)容包括：（1）取消體育課的弊端；（2）說(shuō)明課外活動(dòng)和體育活動(dòng)的必要性和益處，至少三點(diǎn)。2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3. 詞數(shù)100左右。

第2步：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：It is known that（眾所周知）；cancel our sports class（取消我們的體育課）；the college entrance exam（高考）；In addition to（除了---之外）；Last but not least（最后但并不是最不重要的）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文是一封倡議信，格式正確，內(nèi)容符合要求，文章結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文找那個(gè)使用高級(jí)詞匯和句子。It is known that our school intends to cancel our sports class when we are in Grade 3.主語(yǔ)從句和when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句完美結(jié)合；Teachers and parents may agree, for there is only one year left for us to take the college entrance exam.此句中for是一個(gè)并列連詞；to be well prepared for the final exam, it is necessary that senior students attach importance to take exercise and keep healthy.動(dòng)詞不定式一般式的被動(dòng)式做目的狀語(yǔ)；另外，However, First of all, Besides, In addition to，Last but not least, In a nutshell,等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。