Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Peter發(fā)郵件向你詢問中國的植樹節(jié)（Tree Planting Day）的相關(guān)信息。請你回復郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 植樹節(jié)的主要活動；

2. 人們重視植樹節(jié)的原因；

3. 建議他來中國體驗。

注意: 1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I'm very glad to receive your letter and give a brief introduction to Tree Planting Day in our country.

Tree Planting Day, which falls on March 12th every year, is a significant festival in China. On this day, country leaders, civil servants, company employees and even school pupils will go outdoors to plant trees. Why do people attach so much importance to the festival? For one thing, more and more people have realized the urgency of environmental protection. For another, some measures the government takes to encourage people to plant more trees play a key part.

Do you want to know more about the festival? I strongly suggest that you come to China and experience it. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生寫一封郵件答復向你詢問中國植樹節(jié)相關(guān)信息的英國筆友Peter，讓他了解中國植樹節(jié)相關(guān)情況并邀請他來中國體驗。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 植樹節(jié)的主要活動；

2. 人們重視植樹節(jié)的原因；

3. 建議他來中國體驗。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

give a brief introduction to；fall on；attach so much importance to；environmental protection；take measures；encourage sb. to do sth.；play a key part

第三步：連詞成句

1. I'm very glad to receive your letter and give a brief introduction to Tree Planting Day in our country.

2. Tree Planting Day, which falls on March 12th every year, is a significant festival in China.

3. Why do people attach so much importance to the festival?

4. more and more people have realized the urgency of environmental protection.

5. some measures the government takes to encourage people to plant more trees play a key part.

(根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。）

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表換一種方式表達：In other words, that is to say,

6.表進行舉例說明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表陳述事實：In fact, frankly speaking

8.表選擇：either…or…，or

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改