Question

【題目】

【河南省洛陽市2017年高三第二次統(tǒng)考】 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

When I was a kid, my father and mother were made me join a tennis club in the center of our city. Every day both my parent would take me to club after school. I played tennis ,ate snacks and did my homework here. It was basically my second family. A woman whose name was Li Li, my first private coach, was as a mother to us. She not only taught me everything that I know about what to play tennis, but treats me well. She was kind or always trained me with great patient. In my heart, she was the best coach in our city.

Answer 1

【答案】1.去掉were 2. parent改為parents 3. club 前加the 4. here 改為there 5. as改為like

6. us改為me 7. what改為how 8. treats 改為treated 9. or改為and 10. patient改為patience

【解析】1.句意：我的父母讓我加入了一個網(wǎng)球俱樂部。此處表示主動，故去掉were。

2. 根據(jù)both可知此處指的是父母，故把parent改為parents。

3.此處特指加入的俱樂部，故在club 前加the。

4.句意：我在那兒打網(wǎng)球、吃零食和做作業(yè)。故把here 改為there。

5.句意：私人教練像一個媽媽。故把as改為like。

6.句意：我的私人教練對我像一個媽媽。故把us改為me。

7.句意：我了解關(guān)于怎樣打網(wǎng)球。故把what改為how 。

8. not only taught ---, but treats--，根據(jù)句意可知是并列關(guān)系，應(yīng)用一般過去時態(tài)，故把treats 改為treated。

9.句意：她善良并且極大的耐心訓(xùn)練我。故把or改為and。

10. great修飾名詞，故把patient改為patience。