Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\ )劃掉。
注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞； 2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分
Life is not easy for any of us. We will unavoidably suffered bitterness and sadness from failure. Thus, there is very important for us to have a good mood in our daily life. If you have a good mood, you will be happy with everything in the world. Most important, you will have an optimistic effect at the people around you. We all will live harmonious and happy life. It is good for our health as well.
However, sometimes when you meet some difficulties, when you quarrel with others, but when you fail in doing nothing, you may have a bad mood. If so, you should get rid of it as soon as possibly. As we all know, every coin has two sides. So you should think more about its bright side. We are sure that everything will be better with time passed by.
Remember: only you can make himself happy.

Answer 1

【答案】①suffered→suffer

②there→it

③important→importantly

④at→on

⑤在live之后加a

⑥but→or

⑦nothing→something

⑧possibly→possible

⑨passed→passing

⑩himself→yourself

【解析】生活對我們任何一個人來說都不容易。記�。褐挥凶约翰拍苁棺约洪_心。

①助動詞will后面用動詞原形，故把suffered改為suffer。

②此處不是there be句型，而是it作形式主語，動詞不定式作真正的主語，故把there改為it。

③副詞修飾整個句子，故把important改為importantly。

④固定詞組：have an effect on sth.對……產生影響，故把at改為on。

⑤固定形式：live a...life，表示“過著……的生活”。故在live之后加a。

⑥句意：當你和別人爭吵或做某事失敗時，你會有一個壞的情緒。故把but 改為 or。

⑦ 句意：失敗做某事。故把nothing 改為 something。

⑧as ...as possible盡可能……。故把possibly改為 possible。

⑨with的獨立主格結構，time與pass是主動關系，故把passed 改為passing。

⑩句意：只有你才能使你自己開心。故把himself改為 yourself。