Question

【題目】假如你是李華，寒假參加了社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。你想與朋友Peter分享本次經(jīng)歷，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇E-mail.

工作地點(diǎn)	一家德克士(Dicos)快餐店
工作時(shí)間	四個(gè)星期，每天7小時(shí)
工作情況	當(dāng)保潔員，工作辛苦且枯燥，每天要起早貪黑地工作，差點(diǎn)中途放棄
你的體會(huì)	遇到了一些沒(méi)預(yù)料到的困難，認(rèn)識(shí)到了勞動(dòng)(labor)的意義……

注意: 1. 郵件開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，詞數(shù)100左右。

3. 提示詞：保潔員(cleaner) 勞動(dòng)(labor)

Dear Peter,

Hi, I had an opportunity to take part in social practice last winter vacation.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

Hi, I had an opportunity to take part in social practice last winter vacation.

During the winter holiday，I figured I should do something meaningful instead of staying at home，so I got a job at Dicos, a fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner．I worked seven hours a day for four weeks. Hard and boring, the job seemed endless，which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up half way．After all，I stuck to it with determination. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term began.

I met with a lot of unexpected difficulties in the work，but they helped me understand better what labor means．I suppose it is really a successful experience.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】根據(jù)題目要求你寫(xiě)一封信與朋友Peter分享社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，題目中明確要求有：工作時(shí)間；工作地點(diǎn)；工作情況；自己體會(huì)。

首先，同學(xué)們要點(diǎn)明寫(xiě)信目的；然后要明確地指出社會(huì)實(shí)踐的內(nèi)容；最后表達(dá)自己社會(huì)實(shí)踐的體會(huì)等等。同學(xué)們要能適當(dāng)把握四個(gè)部分的內(nèi)容，使文章內(nèi)容相協(xié)調(diào)，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使語(yǔ)義連貫，連接順暢。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

范文有一些值得大家學(xué)習(xí)的地方，如：文章使用了很多優(yōu)秀的詞匯和短語(yǔ)：social practice社會(huì)實(shí)踐，figure弄明白，stuck to堅(jiān)持，met with遇見(jiàn)，suppose認(rèn)為等等；文章也使用了多樣的句式，如定語(yǔ)從句Hard and boring, the job seemed endless，which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up half way，賓語(yǔ)從句but they helped me understand better what labor means等等。