【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Last Sunday afternoon I went to a park by bike. I was walking in the park while a couple asked me if I could help take some photos of me. I was more than willingly to offer my service. With many thank, they waved goodbye to me. Therefore, a few minutes later, I found they had been dropped a black handbag on the bench where they had sat. Believe they would return, I decided to wait for them with the handbag on my hand. Soon, they hurried back and I returned the handbag to them, for that they thanked me again and again. What great pleasure it was to help others out!

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【解析】

第一處：考查固定句式。句式be doing something when…..正在做某事，在這時(shí)….（發(fā)生了意外的事情）；此處的when是并列連詞，意為“在這時(shí)/那時(shí)….”，while無此功能。

第二處：考查代詞。我正在公園里散步，這時(shí)一對夫妻問我是否可以幫助他們拍一些照片。使用代詞them指代本句中提及的這一對夫妻。

第三處：考查形容詞。形容詞willing愿意的；構(gòu)成固定搭配be willing to do something愿意做某事；副詞willingly無此用法。

第四處：考查名詞。名詞thank意為“感謝”，通常都以復(fù)數(shù)形式出現(xiàn)，如Thanks a lot。

第五處：考查上下文。他們和我告別以后，我卻發(fā)現(xiàn)他們把一只黑色的手包忘記在凳子上。上下文之間為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故使用however串聯(lián)上下文。副詞therefore表示因果關(guān)系。

第六處：考查語態(tài)。本句主語they與動(dòng)詞drop之間構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系，不需要使用被動(dòng)語態(tài)，故been多余。

第七處：考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。本句中動(dòng)詞believe與句子主語I構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系，所以使用現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨狀語。

第八處：考查介詞。介詞in在…中；短語with the handbag in my hand表示包在我的手里。

第九處：考查定語從句。關(guān)系代詞that通常不能放在介詞的后面，本句中which指代前句內(nèi)容，作為介詞for的賓語。

第十處：考查冠詞。抽象名詞pleasure前面加不定冠詞a，泛指一件令人快樂的事情。當(dāng)pleasure單獨(dú)使用的時(shí)候，不需要使用冠詞。句意：能夠幫助他人真是一件令人快樂的事情�。�

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