Question

【題目】高中生在成長過程中會碰到一些煩惱。就這一話題你班正籌備召開一次主題班會。請你依據(jù)下表進行必要的思考，并用英語準(zhǔn)備一篇到會發(fā)言材料。

Pains	Solutions
相貌、體形不美	不必在意
不被他人理解，朋友少	加強溝通
學(xué)習(xí)成績落后，壓力大	？
零花錢不多	？

注意:

1．詞數(shù)150左右；開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù).

2．寫作必須包含表中所列內(nèi)容,可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使得上下文意思連貫.

Boys and girls:

We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely....

Answer 1

【答案】

Boys and girls:

We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely. First of all, some of us are upset about their figures and looks. Personally, I argue that it is one's inner beauty that really matters. That is why we needn't care about it.

Second, when we are misunderstood by our teachers, parents or even classmates, we can find a proper time to have a heart-to-heart talk with them, as communication is the best way to remove misunderstandings. Some of us complain they have few true friends. Being open-minded and ready to help others will surely gain popularity among peers.

Third, we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed. Determined to work efficiently, we can overcome any difficulty. If necessary, we may turn to the teachers for help.

Last, some of us don't have much pocket money, so they feel unhappy. Isn't it strange? So long as we have some, that's enough. We high school students should learn to save, as saving is a good virtue of the Chinese, shouldn’t we?

That's all. Thank you.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求就高中生在成長過程中會碰到一些煩惱準(zhǔn)備一篇發(fā)言材料。要點已給出，寫作時要針對要點逐個發(fā)表自己的看法，語句要通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】本文是一篇英語發(fā)言稿，共分三段，內(nèi)容齊全，布局合理，使用高級句子。We high school students do have some growing pains, but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely. but表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系；I argue that it is one's inner beauty that really matters.強調(diào)句式經(jīng)典至極；That is why we needn't care about it. Why引導(dǎo)表語從句；when we are misunderstood by our teachers, parents or even classmates, we can find a proper time to have a heart-to-heart talk with them, as communication is the best way to remove misunderstandings.when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句和as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句完美結(jié)合；Being open-minded and ready to help others will surely gain popularity among peers. 動名詞作主語恰到好處；we may fall behind others, which makes us stressed. which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；Determined to work efficiently, we can overcome any difficulty.過去分詞作狀語；If necessary, we may turn to the teachers for help.使用省略句；So long as we have some, that's enough. So long as引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句；as saving is a good virtue of the Chinese, shouldn’t we?反意疑問句畫龍點睛；另外，F(xiàn)irst of all, Personally, Second, Last為文章增色添彩。