Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中

共有10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)( )，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用()劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10 處，多者（從第11 處起）不計(jì)分。

One Monday afternoon, we were playing the basketball on the playground while I suddenly slipped and fell over. On seeing that, all my classmates rushed to me. Under the help of several other students, Li Xiang, one of my best friend put me on his back and head for the clinic immediately. It turned out that my right ankle got injured but I had to be sent to hospital. He did not leave until an ambulance was arrived. The following day, he came to see me. To my greatly relief, he brought textbooks to them and helped me with my lessons. It was a great pleasure have such a devoting friend.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】去掉playing后面的the

【2】while→when

【3】Under→With

【4】friend→friends

【5】head→headed

【6】but→and/so

【7】greatly→great

【8】them→me

【9】pleasure后面加to

【10】devoting→devoted

【解析】

【1】去掉playing后面的the 考查冠詞。表示從事某種球類運(yùn)動(dòng)前不加冠詞，故去掉the。

【2】while→when 考查連詞。be doing when ...表示“正在做某事這時(shí)……”。

【3】Under→With 考查介詞。with the help of 在……幫助下。

【4】friend→friends 考查名詞。One of后面加名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【5】head→headed 考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。整個(gè)文章用一般過(guò)去時(shí)來(lái)敘述。

【6】but→and/so 考查連詞。句意：結(jié)果我的右腳踝受傷并且我不得不被送到醫(yī)院。不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而是順承關(guān)系，故改為and/so。

【7】greatly→great 考查形容詞。relief是名詞，要用形容詞修飾，故把greatly改為great。

【8】them→me 考查代詞。句意：使我感到安慰的是，他給我?guī)��?lái)了課本并幫我輔導(dǎo)功課。bring sth to sb.給某人帶來(lái)某物。

【9】pleasure后面加to 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。It's a pleasure to do sth. 做某事是一種樂(lè)趣。

【10】devoting→devoted 考查形容詞。devoted“獻(xiàn)身的；忠誠(chéng)的”，用來(lái)修飾人；這里表示一個(gè)忠心的朋友。