Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號(/\)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Alibaba’s founder Jack Ma, his company has been valued at more than $22 1billion of which Ma owned 6%, is put in the top position among China’s wealthiest. But he stays outside the list of the world’s 10 rich people.

Fought against a hard life, young Ma still managed to learn English well ‘enough to gain a degree and became a teacher, Afterwards he started a translation agency in which took him to the US, where he introduced to the Internet. His fate was bound to change before he was accidentally appointed to take an American visitor Jerry Yang, a co-founder of Yahoo, in a tour of the Great Wall. The meeting obvious proved to be a turning point for all of them, promoting the birth of Alibaba and the later cooperation with Jerry Yang.

Answer 1

【答案】第一句：his改為whose; owned改為owns

第二句：rich改為richest

第三句：Fought改為Fighting

第四句：去掉in; he后加was

第五句：before改為when/after; in改為to

第六句：obvious改為obviously; all改為both

【解析】本文是一篇人物介紹類文章。本文主要介紹了阿里巴巴的創(chuàng)始人馬云。

第一處：whose company has been valued at more than $22 1billion of which Ma owned 6%,作定語修飾Jack Ma，所以whose company has been valued at more than $22 1billion of which Ma owned 6%,是一個定語從句，關系詞在從句中作定語，所以用whose，第一句：his改為whose。

第二處：考查時態(tài)。表示主語現(xiàn)在的狀態(tài)，用一般現(xiàn)在時，且主語是第三人稱單數(shù)，謂語動詞用單數(shù)，所以owned改為owns。

第三處：考查最高級。但是他仍然在世界最富有的前十個人之外。表示“最富有的”，用最高級，所以第二句：rich改為richest。

第四處：考查現(xiàn)在分詞。fight與其邏輯主語young Ma之間是主動關系，所以用現(xiàn)在分詞，第三句：Fought改為Fighting。

第五處：考查定語從句。which took him to the US,作定語修飾a translation agency，所以which took him to the US是一個定語從句，關系詞在從句中作主語，所以第四句：去掉in。

第六處：考查語態(tài)�！八�”和“介紹”之間是被動關系，故用被動語態(tài)，所以he后加was。

第七處：考查連詞。在他偶然被委派去接見一位美國訪問者楊致遠之后，他的命運注定會改變。表示“在……之后”，所以第五句：before改為when/after。

第八處：考查固定句型。take sb. to do sth.帶某人做某事，是固定句型，所以in改為to。

第九處：考查副詞。修飾動詞proved，用副詞，所以obvious改為obviously。

第十處：考查代詞�！榜R云”和“楊致遠”是兩個人，both表示兩者，all表示三者或三者以上，所以all改為both。