Question

【題目】假如你是李華，目前在英國一所學校交流學習。你的老師請你就中國飲食給同學們做口頭交流。內容要點如下:

1.中國人對飲食的理解；

2.經典中國美食推薦。

注意:

1.詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China. Knowing you are interested in Chinese food, I’m very glad to tell you something about it.

For Chinese, eating is not only a way of surviving but also reveals your attitude towards life. Having a good meal, tasty and healthy, means happiness.

And I’d like to recommend some delicious Chinese food to you. The first is hot pot, which originates from Sichuan. When eating hotpot, you can put everything you like in the boiling water in the oven. It's very spicy but delicious. And the next is Zong zi. It is a kind of food made by rice wrapped in bamboo leaves. And I prefer sweet Zongzi.

That’s all. Hope this can help you better understand Chinese food.

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生介紹一下中國飲食，包括中國人對飲食的理解和介紹一些美食。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)應為一般現在時。

結構：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。

要求：1. 中國人對飲食的理解；

2. 經典中國美食推薦。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

Exchange student; Chinese food ; attitude towards life; tasty and healthy; recommend; hotpot,; originates from; Zongzi; be wrapped in; bamboo leaves

第三步：連詞成句

1. I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China.

2. eating is not only a way of surviving but also reveals your attitude towards life.

3. Having a good meal, tasty and healthy, means happiness.

4. I’d like to recommend some delicious Chinese food to you.

5. The first is hotpot, which originates from Sichuan.

6.It's very spicy but delicious.

7. It is a kind of food made by rice wrapped in bamboo leaves.

根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結構順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉折對比關系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改