Question

7．閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150 詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文．
某中學(xué)報(bào)紙就"What will you do when you argue with your parents？"為主題征集讀
者意見(jiàn)．下文是一些學(xué)生讀者的回復(fù)．
When you argue with your parents，what will you do？Here are some solutions from
our readers．
Zhang Hui：I was tired of my mom's nagging （嘮叨）．I was easily frustrated because I
had so much work to do．When Mom was complaining about my messy table，I suddenly
yelled at her．Mom stared at me in a strange way．I regretted being so rude to her and
couldn't help crying．Then the next day we had a deep talk．To my surprise，mom said sorry
to me．It made me realize a deep talk with parents is really productive．
Zhou Shuchang：It upset me most that my mother was absent from the first parents
meeting in Senior Three because she was angry with my poor scores．Her absence
embarrassed me．Getting home，I didn't say a word．I decided to write to my mom telling
her what I was thinking of her．
Wang Yang：I love pop songs so much that I always hum （哼唱） the tunes even at
dinner．My father dislikes what he calls"decadent （頹廢的） music"．It makes me fail to
communicate with him．Noticing his disappointment，I decided to do something．I asked
him to listen to some songs I had selected carefully for him and I tried to listen to some
songs that he enjoys very much．Gradually my dad started to accept my songs and now we
have a little in common on music．
寫作內(nèi)容
1．以約30 個(gè)詞概括上文學(xué)生讀者處理與父母爭(zhēng)執(zhí)的措施．
2．然后以約120 個(gè)詞談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)，內(nèi)家包括：
（1）處理好父母與子女關(guān)系的關(guān)鍵是什么；
（2）你成功處理與父母爭(zhēng)執(zhí)的一次經(jīng)歷．
寫作要求
1．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得
直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語(yǔ)篇連貫．
Whatwill you do when you argue with your parents？
Threeways are mentioned in the passage to deal with the arguments with parents．We can have a heart-to-heart talkwith them，writeto tell them our opinions and try to find something in common with them．
Thereis usually a generation gap between children and parents．Therefore，it is usually very hard for the two generations to get along verysmoothly．Sometimesquarrels or even conflicts happen between them．However，no matter what our parents do，they always do it for
our good．Sothe key to dealing with the relationship between parents and children is tounderstand each other．
Ionce had a fierce quarrel with my parents because I did not want them tointerfere in my personal affairs．Later，myfather had a sincere talk with me and he told me he could understandwhat I thought．Atthe same time，heshared his opinion，whichdeeply impressed me and narrowed our gap．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過(guò)渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由或列舉事例．第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語(yǔ)言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．時(shí)態(tài)一般用一般過(guò)去時(shí)或一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱一般用第三人稱．重要短語(yǔ)：argue with sb（與…爭(zhēng)辯），deal with （處理），have a heart-to-heart talk （交心的談話），in common with （共同之處），get along（相處），impressed sb （使某人印象深刻），have a fierce quarrel with sb（和某人激烈地爭(zhēng)吵）．

解答 What will you do when you argue with your parents？
Three ways are mentioned in the passage to deal with the arguments withparents．We can have a heart-to-heart talk with them，write to tell them ouropinions and try to find something in common with them．（概括）
There is usually a generation gap between children and parents．Therefore，it is usually very hard forthe two generations to get along very smoothly．Sometimes quarrels or even conflicts happen between them．However，no matter what our parentsdo，they always do it for
our good．【高分句型】So the key to dealing withthe relationship between parents and children is to understand each other．（處理父母與子女關(guān)系的關(guān)鍵）

I once had a fierce quarrel with my parents because I did not want themto interfere in my personal affairs．Later，my father had a sincere talk with me and he told me he could understandwhat I thought．At the same time，he shared his opinion，which deeply impressed me and narrowed our gap．【高分句型】（成功處理與父母爭(zhēng)執(zhí)的事例）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說(shuō)明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來(lái)說(shuō)，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．