Question

12．閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文．
Recently many universities have used the school beauty and a handsome boy as a way of advertising to attract new students．
Web celebrity Zhang Zetian，who is popularly known by her online nickname'Milk Tea Sister'appeared on the cover page of Tsinghua University's magazine，along with other famous people in the university in 2012．
Renmin University，a top university in Beijing featured graduation photos of a beautiful girl，Kang Yikun in 2013in its website's homepage．The photo won praise from netizens who said it showed the atmosphere of the graduation season in a creative way．
Famous school beauties and handsome boys also appeared in Wuhan University，Northwest University，Beijing Language and Culture University and many other schools．
Some approve of this way of advertising．A young writer，Zhang Lechen，who was born in the 1980s，said this promotional method was creative and had a strong visual impact and as a result was a much more effective way to communicate．
However，others argue against the method，saying that it is not a good way for the university to use attractive girls or boys to make advertisements．

[寫作內(nèi)容]
1．以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2．以約120個詞就"大學(xué)招生"這個話題談?wù)勀愕目捶�，�?nèi)容包括：
（1）你對大學(xué)利用美女、帥哥打招生廣告的看法；
（2）你會根據(jù)大學(xué)哪些條件來決定報(bào)讀；
（3）你希望在大學(xué)結(jié)識什么樣的人．
[寫作要求]
1．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫．
Recently many universities have used beautiful girls orhandsome boys to make advertisements to attract new students．Different people havedifferent attitudes towards it．Some are for it while others are against it．
While using the school beauty and a handsome boy in ads is aneffective way to catch our eye，I don't think it is an appropriate way for the university toattract new students．For one thing，senior school students won't choose the university just because there isa beautiful girl or handsome boy on campus．For another，it may mislead the value of us students，causing some of us to paytoo much attention to people's outer appearance rather than their inner beauty．
As for me，I will choose my ideal university based on its teaching staff，school culture and space forindependent thought and creativity instead of the so called"campus goddess"．
A good friend has a lifelong positive influence on us．Therefore，I hope to make acquaintanceof those who are learned，broad-minded and helpful in university．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照"三段式"模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由或列舉事例．第三段：個人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．時態(tài)一般用一般過去時或一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱一般用第三人稱．重要短語：make advertisements （做廣告），have different attitudes towards…（對…有不同的態(tài)度），be for …（贊成…），mislead the value of…（誤導(dǎo)…的價值觀），as for （關(guān)于），be based on…（在…基礎(chǔ)之上），have a positive influence on…（對…有積極影響），make acquaintance of…（認(rèn)識，結(jié)識…）．

解答 Recently many universities have used beautiful girls orhandsome boys to make advertisements to attract new students．Different people havedifferent attitudes towards it．Some are for it while others are against it．（概括）
While using the school beauty and a handsome boy in ads is aneffective way to catch our eye，I don't think it is an appropriate way for the university toattract new students．For one thing，senior school students won't choose the university just because there isa beautiful girl or handsome boy on campus．【高分句型】For another，it may mislead the value ofus students，causing some of us to pay too much attention to people's outerappearance rather than their inner beauty．【高分句型】（對大學(xué)利用美女、帥哥打招生廣告的看法----不贊同）
     As for me，I will choose my ideal university based on its teaching staff，school culture and space forindependent thought and creativity instead of the so called"campus goddess"． （覺得報(bào)讀大學(xué)的條件）
A good friend has a lifelong positive influence on us．Therefore，I hope to make acquaintanceof those who are learned，broad-minded and helpful in university．（希望在大學(xué)結(jié)識的人）

點(diǎn)評 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與 寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．