Question

2．假設(shè)你正在參加一場英語演講比賽，你抽到的演講題目是"Time and tide wait for no man"，請(qǐng)你就該話題發(fā)表演講．內(nèi)容包括：
（1）．你對(duì)此話題的理解；
（2）．用自己的一個(gè)事例闡述說明；
（3）．總結(jié)發(fā)言．
注意：
（1）．詞數(shù)100左右；
（2）．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Good afternoon everyone!I'm so glad today to stand here to make this speech．My topic is"Time and tide wait for no man"．Time is valuable and it is a bird forever on the wing．Therefore we should make full use of it．
One year ago，I made acquaintances with some problem students and fellinto bad habits．I didn't want to go to school any longer and started to playtruant．Later，my English teacher found my problem and helped me out of the bigtrouble．How I regret the time I wasted!
Lost time is gone forever and can never be back．I sincerely hope thatevery one of us should have a strong sense of time and make good use of it．．
That's a11．Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，根據(jù)所提供的材料，寫一篇演講稿，演講題目是"Time and tidewait for no man"．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：對(duì)這句話的理解；用自己的一個(gè)事例闡述說明；總結(jié)發(fā)言．寫作時(shí)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主．人稱以第一和第三人稱．重要短語：make thisspeech （發(fā)表演講），make fulluse of（充分利用），make acquaintances with （熟悉），fall into bad habits（養(yǎng)成壞習(xí)慣），help sb out of …（幫某人擺脫…），have a strongsense of time （強(qiáng)烈的時(shí)間觀念）．

解答 Good afternoon everyone!I'm so glad to stand here tomake this speech．My topic is"Time and tide wait for no man"．Time is valuableand it is a bird forever on the wing．【高分句型】Therefore we should make full use of it．（對(duì)這句話的理解）
      One year ago，I made acquaintances with some problem students and fellinto bad habits．I didn't want to go to school any longer and started to playtruant．Later，my English teacher found my problem and helped me out of the bigtrouble．How I regret the time I wasted!（用自己的一個(gè)事例闡述說明）
     Lost time is gone forever and can never be back．I sincerely hope thatevery one of us should have a strong sense of time and make good use of it．【高分句型】（總結(jié)發(fā)言）
    That's all．Thank you for attention．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．