Question

【題目】假設你是李華，最近，在英語課上，你們班學習了有關急救方面的一些常識，同學們普遍對這方面的知識很感興趣，大家都認為學校有必要提供相關方面的課程，請你作為班長給校長寫一封信，提出你的建議，并寫出建議的理由。

內容包括： 1. 學習急救知識的意義；

2. 具體建議及原因；

3. 重申建議的重要性。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)80左右；

2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Principal,

Our class has been studying some knowledge about first aid. We are all interested in it and feel that being able to give first aid when needed can make a difference before proper medical treatment is given.

Therefore, we suggest that courses on first aid should be offered in our school. Posters about the treatment for different injuries can be put up in every corner of our campus. What’s more, our school can organize the rescue drills to provide a stage for students to practice and gain experience in first aid.

I believe having a knowledge of first aid is of vital importance. I would appreciate it if you could take our suggestions into consideration. Best regards!

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生作為班長給校長寫一封信，提出有關開設急救方面的課程的建議，并寫出建議的理由。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時。

要求：1. 學習急救知識的意義；

2. 具體建議及原因；

3. 重申建議的重要性。

第二步：列提綱（重點詞組）

knowledge; first aid; be interested in; be able to; make a difference; proper medical treatment; course; posters; different injuries; put up; corner; what’s more; the rescue drills; gain; of vital importance; appreciate; take sth. into consideration

第三步：連詞成句

1.Our class has been studying some knowledge about first aid.

2.We are all interested in it and feel that being able to give first aid when needed can make a difference before proper medical treatment is given.

3.Therefore, we suggest that courses on first aid should be offered in our school.

4.Posters about the treatment for different injuries can be put up in every corner of our campus.

5.What’s more, our school can organize the rescue drills to provide a stage for students to practice and gain experience in first aid.

6.I believe having a knowledge of first aid is of vital importance.

7.I would appreciate it if you could take our suggestions into consideration.

8.Best regards!

根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結構順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉折對比關系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n./doing, On the one hand…, On the other hand… Some…, while others…, as for, so…that…

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改