Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Mike來(lái)信說(shuō)中國(guó)書法很難學(xué)。就此請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封回信， 主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.學(xué)習(xí)書法的意義；

2.學(xué)習(xí)書法的技巧；

3．給他鼓勵(lì)和信心。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：書法calligraphy;毛筆writing brush

Dear Mike,

I’m sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning Chinese calligraphy.

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

I’m sorry lo know that you have difficulty in learning Chinese calligraphy. In fact you are not alone. Many people, including some of my classmates, feel it hard to write with a writing brush.

However, it is very important to learn the artistic handwriting of characters. Learning Chinese calligraphy is very helpful in learning more about Chinese culture and history. Besides, written Chinese is well-known for its beauty.

If you want to be a good user of the writing brush, first you have to be patient. Second, you have to keep practising since practice makes perfect. Lastly, you should pay attention to the use of calligraphy models. Just be confident and practise hard and you'll be an expert in Chinese calligraphy.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

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