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假如你叫李華，你的朋友Jenny來信向你詢問如何保持健康。請你給他發(fā)一封e-mail提些建議。內(nèi)容要點如下：

1. 注意合理飲食,多吃水果蔬菜；

2. 保證充足睡眠，至少8小時；

3. 堅持鍛煉身體，多參加體育運動。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增添細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

Dear Jenny,

Yours LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jenny,

How nice to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice.

We know, food is of great important to us teenagers. Since we grow very fast , we are in need of nutritious food , such as fresh vegetables, fruits, fish, meat and so on. However, I think you’d better not eat food with much sugar and fat. And you should get plenty of sleep, which is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day. In addition, you should take physical exercise regularly. It will be beneficial to your health. Only in this way can you keep fit.

Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假如你叫李華，你的朋友Jenny來信向你詢問如何保持健康。請你給他發(fā)一封e-mail提些建議。內(nèi)容要點如下：1. 注意合理飲食,多吃水果蔬菜；2. 保證充足睡眠，至少8小時；3. 堅持鍛煉身體，多參加體育運動。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增添細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】How nice to hear from you!感嘆句位于句子開頭；In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy.疑問詞加動詞不定式運用巧妙；Since we grow very fast , we are in need of nutritious food , such as fresh vegetables, fruits, fish, meat and so on. Since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，在此表示一種客觀事實；I think you’d better not eat food with much sugar and fat.賓語從句出現(xiàn)在句中；And you should get plenty of sleep, which is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day.非限制性定語從句和動詞不定式完美結(jié)合；Only in this way can you keep fit.部分倒裝把文章推向了高潮；另外，However, In addition,的點綴，為文章增色添彩。