Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

My name is John and I must share with you an event which took place on Flight 1553 out of DCA. My wife and I were traveling to Miami to celebrate an achievement for her and as you can imagine, we were looking forward to fun, sun and laughter.

We boarded the aircraft, without a care in the world. It was cold in Washington and we were ready for Florida. Shortly after taking my seat, I began to feel sick. I knew something wasn't right but just couldn't find out what was happening .Being a doctor and a stubborn man, I resisted efforts by my wife to call for assistance. As the aircraft began its departure roll, I lost consciousness for a short amount of time. As I came around, I quickly realized a few things. Firstly, something very bad had happened to me .Secondly, the aircraft was too heavy with the fuel to go back home. Thirdly, my loss of consciousness had been so deep that I found myself out of control. So not only did I have a medical issue to deal with, but I also had to figure out how to deal with an embarrassing experience.

My wife gathered the crew as soon as it was safe to move about and I made my way to the washroom to attempt to clean up. I did my best and the flight crew members were so supportive,

checking on me often and reassuring me that there was nothing to be embarrassed about. It was their sympathy and support that helped me so much. During the flight they kept watching over me and I suddenly had a small group of nurse, bringing blankets, food, drinks and caring and smile. I was thankful to them.

注意：

1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為 150 左右；

2. 應(yīng)使用 5 個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；

3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；

4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；

Paragraph 1： Upon landing, I remained in my seat, allowing other people to go first.

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Paragraph 2：Hearing that , the captain left and returned a couple minutes later with a pair of his own blue jeans.

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Answer 1

【答案】Upon landing, I remained in my seat, allowing other people to go first. As I was in my seat, I looked up and see the captain standing with a warm smile. “What can I do for you?” the captain asked. I told him I was ok. I was very embarrassed and concerned because of the previous things. He said, “What sizes of pants do you wear?” His voice was full of care. I was puzzled and replied,“34*34.Why do you ask this?”

Paragraph 2：Hearing that, the captain left and returned a couple minutes later with a pair of his own blue jeans. The man opened his own luggage and gave a complete stranger his pants. I didn’t know what to say. Then I looked at my wife, who smiled and ,without saying a word, let me know it was ok. I made my way to the exit and he said ,“Change on the aircraft. It is fine.”Because of the experience, I was thankful to him for his kindness. I made up my mind to treat others with kindness.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫。

通過閱讀所給文章可知，作者講述了自己乘坐Flight 1553時(shí)發(fā)生的故事。作者登機(jī)后不久就感到不舒服，甚至還失去意識(shí)。幸運(yùn)的是全機(jī)組人員都來(lái)支持幫助，給予各方面的關(guān)心。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：飛機(jī)一著陸，我留在座位上，讓別人先走。所以下文應(yīng)該寫在這期間遇到了什么人，發(fā)生了什么事。根據(jù)第二段開頭可知是遇到了機(jī)長(zhǎng)，機(jī)長(zhǎng)給作者提供了幫助。第二段開頭是：聽到這個(gè)消息，機(jī)長(zhǎng)離開了，幾分鐘后帶著他自己的藍(lán)色牛仔褲回來(lái)了。本段應(yīng)該寫我看到機(jī)長(zhǎng)舉動(dòng)后的所思所做，最后作者表達(dá)了感激之情，下定決心要善待他人。

續(xù)寫時(shí)要求使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)增加了寫作難度，我們要熟悉所給劃線詞語(yǔ)，恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)候加以運(yùn)用。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。