Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

When the pandemic started, some people were wondering if the internet could stand up to the rise in demand. The answer is not only a clear “yes” but this whole period made it even stronger.

How would our world survive without Internet in pandemic situation? The answer is simple: differently but not better or worse. We know that the internet available is changing a lot of things. Thanks to it, people were able to keep on working from their home, others were able to keep contact with their loved ones and friends and most found their entertainment relief through it. Had it not ever existed, people would have stayed at home and enjoyed their family or created more since they would have had more time on their hands.

But in today’s world, the internet has become the one link that unites us all. It is the reason why people were able to forget for minutes and hours at a time through the use of Internet. It is the reason why so many companies will survive and most probably grow stronger afterwards, since they were able to plan through Skype and Zoom. It is the reason why lovers did not fall into full depression, having to live away from their partner for a few months, since they were at least able to talk and see each other while sharing moments of their lives. There cannot be any doubts anymore: The internet is the one link that unites us all.

In the first three months of this year, internet use has grown by 25% in most major cities around the world. This number is reflected in the use of various applications and websites. One of the clearest jumps up is the use of video calls. This should not be surprising since it is used both for business and for personal purposes. PC Game stores have also seen a huge increase in their sales during this period. A bit more surprising maybe, is the increase of online grocery stores usage as the stores were breaking down under the demand.

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Answer 1

【答案】The internet supports the rising demand and grew stronger confronting the pandemic. The life without internet would be then different but not better or worse since internet offers ease to work and connection but steals personal time. Nowadays the internet connects us all so that people forget about time and distance and companies maintain growth. In the first quarter of 2020, internet use has surged worldwide in terms of video calls, PC games and even online grocery stores.

【解析】

這是一篇概要寫(xiě)作題型。要求考生根據(jù)短文寫(xiě)一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

完成一篇概要寫(xiě)作，需要經(jīng)過(guò)三個(gè)步驟：

1.讀懂原文，抓住段落主題句。在閱讀過(guò)程中，需要準(zhǔn)確把握文章的段落大意，學(xué)會(huì)剔除非重要信息，弄清楚不同體裁的文章內(nèi)部的邏輯關(guān)系以及文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。如本文是屬于說(shuō)明文，說(shuō)明文的段落結(jié)構(gòu)多采用總分結(jié)構(gòu)，即作者先提出一個(gè)說(shuō)明的主題，然后段落其他的拓展句都是圍繞這個(gè)主題句進(jìn)行展開(kāi)。如第二段的第一句和第二句“How would our world survive without Internet in pandemic situation? The answer is simple: differently but not better or worse.”表示的是我們的世界是如何在疫情之中缺少因特網(wǎng)的情況下生存的呢？答案很簡(jiǎn)單：不同地但是沒(méi)有好壞。這是本段的主題句，緊接著其他拓展句就有無(wú)因特網(wǎng)的不同生活進(jìn)行說(shuō)明。

2.組織語(yǔ)言，轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá)。在找到主題句明確全文中心的基礎(chǔ)上，不全盤(pán)照抄原文句子，盡量用自己的語(yǔ)言轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá)，組織好語(yǔ)言，注重語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的獨(dú)立性和準(zhǔn)確性以及高級(jí)性，同時(shí)要注意篇幅的比例安排，用較多的文字去表達(dá)重要的內(nèi)容。如本文的第二段主題句是“How would our world survive without Internet in pandemic situation? The answer is simple: differently but not better or worse.”，可以轉(zhuǎn)換為“The life without internet would be different but not better or worse.”

3.通讀全文，邏輯連貫。要牢記各段落要點(diǎn)之間的邏輯關(guān)系和自然銜接，用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞，銜接詞去連貫全文。如：

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result