Question

【題目】下面是你今天前往機場接一位朋友的經(jīng)歷。請根據(jù)漢語提示寫一篇100詞左右的英語日記。

要點提示：

1.下午2:00離開家，朋友的飛機是3:40到；

2.由于遇到沙塵暴，能見度降低,在環(huán)城路上遭遇堵車，耽誤了20分鐘；

3.在3:30趕到機場，接到朋友。

參考詞匯： 1. 能見度visibility 2.降低decrease(v.) 3. 環(huán)城路 the ring road

Saturday, March 16 Fine

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Saturday, March16

Fine

I drove away from home at 2:00 p.m. to meet my friend at the airport,

whose plane was arriving at 3:40 p.m. Unluckily, when I was on the way, I was caught in a sudden sandstorm. Since the visibility was decreased greatly, drivers couldn’t see the road clearly and I was stuck in a traffic jam on the ring road. I was very worried and twenty minutes later, the condition returned to normal and I hurried to the airport as soon as possible. At last, I arrived at the airport and picked up my friend.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇文章要求寫一篇日記，根據(jù)提示信息來寫。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本篇可以按照時間順序來寫。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般過去時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。to meet my friend at the airport,whose plane was arriving at 3:40 p.m.使用了定語從句。Since the visibility was decreased greatly使用了原因狀語從句。本文還使用了大量短語，如drive away from, stuck in a traffic jam,hurried to, as soon as possible，插入語At last，以及副詞Unluckily的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。