Question

【題目】（五）

請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)這幅畫的理解用英語寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容要求：

1.描述漫畫內(nèi)容，如情景，人物，動(dòng)作等。

2.結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?/span>

3.舉例說明你能在尊老愛老方面做些什么。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)120左右。

2.參考詞匯：按摩 massage n.﹠v.

Answer 1

【答案】

Respecting the elders is a good virtue. As is shown in the picture, a granddaughter might have realized that her grandma is tired from doing housework, so she thinks that she should do something about it. So she gives her grandmother a gentle back massage , hoping that it can reduce her grandma’s tiredness.

This reminds me of my parents and grandparents who have been doing whatever they can do to let me have the best education. But, totally absorbed in my own study, I seldom take notice of their tiredness and never offer to do something to make them feel comfortable.

Now I know I can do my bit to help them with everyday cleaning, or at least clean my own bedroom, or massage their feet or legs before bedtime to help them reduce the tiredness. Meanwhile, I will work harder at my lessons. I know my progress is the best reward for their love.

【解析】這是一篇漫畫寫作，屬開放式作文，主要圍繞漫畫談?wù)勛鹄蠍塾祝瑢懽鲿r(shí)注意需先將漫畫大致內(nèi)容描述出來，再談?wù)勛约旱母邢�。本文采用�?jīng)典三段式寫法。第一段描述漫畫大致內(nèi)容，第二段結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，第三段談做法。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】第一段第一句Respecting the elders is a good virtue.就采用動(dòng)名詞做主語的句式；第一段第二句As is shown in the picture, a granddaughter might have realized that her grandma is tired from doing housework使用了as引導(dǎo)的狀語從句；第一段最后一句So she gives her grandmother a gentle back massage , hoping that it can reduce her grandma’s tiredness.使用了非謂語動(dòng)詞作伴隨狀語的句型；第二段第一句This reminds me of my parents and grandparents who have been doing whatever they can do to let me have the best education.首先使用了who引導(dǎo)的定語從句，同時(shí)使用了whatever引導(dǎo)的賓語從句。第二段最后一句totally absorbed in my own study, I seldom take notice of their tiredness and never offer to do something to make them feel comfortable.使用了非謂語動(dòng)詞作伴隨狀語。在短語使用上，使用了be tired from因......感到疲憊，remind of想到…be absorbed in沉溺于…take notice of注意到，at least至少，等短語。在詞語使用上也十分有亮點(diǎn)，如最后一段最后一句使用了Meanwhile，同時(shí)。本文寫作十分有層次感，句式運(yùn)用也十分好。