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10．由于不少孩子沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲，互聯(lián)網(wǎng)被許多家長(zhǎng)憎恨．其實(shí)互聯(lián)網(wǎng)本身沒(méi)錯(cuò)，錯(cuò)的是錯(cuò)誤使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)的人．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇文章，題為"The Internet can benefit us a lot"，談?wù)劸W(wǎng)絡(luò)的益處．
注意：1．開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
         2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
         3．詞數(shù)100左右．
*The Internet is the source of abundant information，and diverse people can turn to it．
*People comb through the webs for what is relevant to their needs for reference．
*Some people make appointments with doctors or others on the Internet．
*People can buy what they want on the Internet．
*People communicate with each other on the Internet．
*People have a distant education on the Internet．
*…
The Internet can benefit us a lot       Many parents hate the Internet because their children abandon themselves to the Internet．Actually，the Internet can benefit us a lot．The Internet，which diverse people can turn to，is the source of abundant information．People can comb through the webs for what is relevant to their needs for reference．They can not only make appointments with doctors on the Internet，but also buy what they want through the Internet．It's very convenient for people to communicate with each other on the Internet．What's more，it is likely that people have a distant education on the Internet．
So，it is the children，rather than the Internet that are to blame．We adults should help our children learn to use the Internet appropriately．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于網(wǎng)絡(luò)的益處的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點(diǎn)明論述的主題；二 論述網(wǎng)絡(luò)的好處；三教育孩子正確利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)．
高分句型：
1．The Internet，which diverse people can turn to，is the source of abundant information．句子里which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指先行詞The Internet，做turn to的賓語(yǔ)，表示"各種各樣的人可以向網(wǎng)絡(luò)求助"．
網(wǎng)絡(luò)是豐富信息的來(lái)源，各種各樣的人可以向網(wǎng)絡(luò)求助．
2．So，it is the children，rather than the Internet that are to blame．句子里it is…that 是強(qiáng)調(diào)句式，強(qiáng)調(diào)主語(yǔ) the children，rather than the Internet．而rather than 連接主語(yǔ)時(shí)用就遠(yuǎn)原則，即謂語(yǔ)和 the children一致．
是孩子本身而不是網(wǎng)絡(luò)應(yīng)該受到責(zé)備．

解答 The Internet can benefit us a lot
       Many parents hate the Internet because their children abandon themselves to the Internet．Actually，the Internet can benefit us a lot．（點(diǎn)明論述的主題）
       The Internet，which diverse people can turn to，is the source of abundant information．【高分句型一】People can comb through the webs for what is relevant to their needs for reference．They can not only make appointments with doctors on the Internet，but also buy what they want through the Internet．It's very convenient for people to communicate with each other on the Internet．What's more，it is likely that people have a distant education on the Internet．（論述網(wǎng)絡(luò)的好處）
       So，it is the children，rather than the Internet that are to blame．【高分句型二】We adults should help our children learn to use the Internet appropriately．（教育孩子正確利用網(wǎng)絡(luò)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查讀寫任務(wù)類作文．
所以類型的寫作都有以下幾步：
第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時(shí)態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，避免填表式或履歷表式表達(dá)．
第二步：擬定提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過(guò)渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，套用句型，上下銜接，地道表達(dá)，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．