Question

【題目】假設你是David，你的朋友Mary向你詢問如何保持健康。請你給她發(fā)一個郵件提些建議。內(nèi)容要點如下：

1．注意合理飲食。多吃魚、肉、豆類等，特別是新鮮蔬菜和水果，不要吃太多甜食。

2．注意鍛煉身體。勞逸結合，多參加體育活動。

3．保證充足的睡眠。不要熬夜，每天至少睡8個小時。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)：100左右。

2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；郵件的開頭已寫好。

Dear Mary，

How nice to hear from you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy.___________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________

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Yours，

David

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear_Mary，

How_nice_to_hear_from_you!_In_your_letter_you_asked_me_how_to_keep_healthy. I would like to give you some advice.

As you know, we teenagers grow very fast, so we need plenty of nutritious foods, such as fish, meat, and beans，especially fresh vegetables and fruits. You'd better not eat too much food rich in sugar or fat. Besides, you should take physical exercise regularly instead of studying in the classroom all the time. For example, you can play basketball with your friends or swim after school. What's more, having enough sleep is very important. So I advise that you should have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not stay up too late in the evening. Only in this way can you keep fit.

Yours，

David

【解析】

試題分析：本題是寫一篇給定材料的電子郵件，寫作的話題為告訴朋友如何保持健康，具體內(nèi)容為保持健康的重要性，保持健康的方式有注意合理飲食， 注意鍛煉身體。勞逸結合, 保證充足的睡眠。在寫作中應注意電子郵件的格式，同時注意符合題意和語言的準確性

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語would like to do 喜歡做某事；plenty of 許多；take exercise 鍛煉；what’s more而且；stay up 熬夜；As you know, we teenagers grow very fast, so we need plenty of nutritious foods這個句子as引導非限制性定語從句；What's more, having enough sleep is very important這個句子運用到動名詞做主語；Only in this way can you keep fit.這個句子運用到only +介詞短語+部分倒裝。